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DBZ Mystic Gohan by KiranBenning

This is my first critique I hope you will not be offended by getting it:)
As I already said I unfortunately have't seen this cartoon so I can only judge the picture not the presentation of this character so, I liked colours, pose, the way you have added shadows but there is in my opinion one problem. The background and the character looks seperately. I understand that the main idea was showing the guy itself but steel I think that you should be more careful with working on the background:) don't hurry keep a calm and carry on your amazing artworks! They bring inspiration with themselves:) Great Job!

By the way I'm impationt to see my request!Thank you very much!:D
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WatchTower513 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I kinda like it with the shadow behind the character. It looks like a cell drawing that you put over the background before you take a picture of it. Old school animation. :D
KiranBenning Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student General Artist
cool :D
KiranBenning Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Student General Artist
hahaha, I get what you mean!
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